Such a great story...
But, there is no end. This story had been abandoned?

(sorry about my english. I'm Portuguese)

Loved the way the characters' names were 'DND-ed' in Takeo's story! XD

OMG!! this is so great...I hope that you can finish it...love the story within the story thing too...great great great...think ronsmyhero would be proud!!

I just reread respect and understanding by Ronsmyhero, and now am rereading this sequel. I just wanted to let you know I think Sasaki's drawing a pic of Kakashi and Sakura walking through the park with Sakura eating the cherry flavored shaved ice is perhaps one of my favorite moments. It makes my heart just flutter to see Kakashi so happy. Such a simple yet wonderful scene. Thanks a bunch.

I just realized the last update was back in 2007. Almost 2 years ago! You didn't give up on this, did you?

I've had no consistent access to a computer for a while so I haven't been able to review. I've been emailing myself the chapters and reading them on my phone. xD Well, here's just letting you know I'm here reading! I know you're busy with other stories, but don't forget the others! I'd love to read more about Takeo. It's the first time I've actually taken interest in an OC.

I'd like to give you a proper review sometime, with constructive criticism and all of that fun stuff. I hope I can get my paws on my laptop soon!

If you've already decided to quit this story then I'll at least keep on rooting for Dirty Deeds. ;)

Listen, I love your fics, having read quite a few of them. I suppose it's too late for me to be commenting on it now, but I think that there's a lack of correlation between your Sakura and R&U's Sakura. In R&U she's a mature 24 year old girl, whereas here she's just a little too much of a petite, blushing little girl. This isn't to say that she seems emotionally naive (because she certainly isn't), it's just strange that she has regressed with her sexual maturity. Once again, I don't expect you to do anything to change it unless you decide to review the fic...

aw. keep going! Its really good!

please continue i really really really really really really really really really want you to continue it is really really really really really really really really good

Great story! Sasaki and Takeo deserve to be happy with one another, so please continue!

*giggles* I love this story so far. Hope you update it soon ^^

Wow! Really good story so far, I'm really loving the way it's progressing. Can't wait for your next update.

i love the storie^-^
it's my FAVORITE:)

i like the story hope you decide to finish it one day, or at least do something about sasaki and takeo

hm..I'll be honest and say that I don't like it as much as the original story by ronsmyhero, but it is always difficult to write a story and this one does have an interesting plot.

this has been a pleasant and interesting read so far.. it's a fairly good continuation of sakura and kakashi's relationship, although there seems to be no new plot concerning the two of them.. it's a good thing this story actually centers around a new plot involving the two other characters..

i've noticed, however, that sasaki is turning out to be more like sakura in behavior and mannerisms.. it's a bit odd..

takeo's story is very intriguing and i can't wait to find out the rest of it.. although the "fantasy writing geek" thing is a bit corny, but it adds a fun new twist to the naruto world :)

hope you update soon! it would be a shame if this fic was abandoned..