it was good. very meaningful and stuff.

Sweet! Very sweet! Nice one!

Nice little fic. Emotions were portrayed pretty well. Although I tend to prefer the pairing with Amelia and Ross, simply because its so funny.

i like how you put just a single word of something describing franz and amelia's love at the end of the sentence.

nice work

Very good, very good indeed! Only real problem I noticed asides a few typos was just a detail I thought may need attention brought to it, though it brings little difference to the actual story.

Though the story says that Amelia and Franz were the only two up, there probably would have been a few party members posted as guards. Again, this doesn't alter the flow of the story too much, but it's them little finishing touches that bring reality to writing.

Very, very nice. Great stuff!

Oh, my... -sniff!- That...was beautiful! I've never seen a Franz and Amelia romance fic written with such...passion. Until now!

I love it! This is definitely going into my favourites list!

Keep writting like this and you'll be famous!

Godspeed!

Aw, that was beautiful. I noticed only a few typos that escaped the careful proofreading eye ("jubilation celebrations" instead of "jubilant celebrations", for instance). It was sweet. The changing of PoV was nice, and, as always, you portray Amelia and Franz very well. :)

Lemurian-Girl

Wow...that was simply beautiful! I loved the switching point-of-view and especially the words at the end of each. Very unique! - I didn't pick up on any huge flaws, but there never are in your fics! This was very cute...you did an excellent job!