Hi Charro,

Great poem! Beautifully written. Too bad that their lives took a separate path. Looking forward to your next story.

Mercy

Wow great!!
But sad!!
Would love to read more!!
Maybe one of MP eyes?!

Wonderful poem. But, it's so sad, they couldn't get together. I guess, our "pretender" just got tired of waiting for his "ice queen". Well done! Beautiful words.