 Dilu 2008-06-25 . chapter 1 Sorry, this is going to be a terrible review, I'm anly reviewing because I review whatever I read, but I haven't gone past the anderiod saga and therefore cannot tell you if I think this a good, probable fic, in which he's very In character.
But I can say its wel written, deep and and interesting read.
Happy Writing
~Dil |
 dbzfan952 2007-12-23 . chapter 1 Once again, great story. You have a lot of skill when it comes to writing. Great job, it was very sweet. |
 ctk3 2007-07-04 . chapter 1 That was so SWEET!
Vegeta being grateful.. Yeah, I never thought of that... Brilliant idea! And nicely written too! Thanks for writing such simple yet strong and touching fic! |
 Musette Fujiwara 2007-04-21 . chapter 1wow...
So awesome. He really has some deep thoughts... |
 SkaifeY 2007-01-21 . chapter 1 Emotionalish. =o Was written nicely. ^_^ nice short story. :P |
 Moondrop Flower 2006-09-26 . chapter 1OMG! Beautiful!
I was thinking on writing one myself, lol, but now you just wrote it all! *_*
Really good short fic!! I loved it!
Fav! TT_TT I just love Bulma-Vegeta. TT_TT
- MoOn - |
 Shashuko the Paisley Maiden 2006-09-15 . chapter 1Aww... it's cute! |
 Sailor-Vela92 2006-08-29 . chapter 1I love it! Wonderful job on his thoughts and everything. I really liked the ending. ^^ Keep writing! |
 Pink Cat 2006-08-25 . chapter 1 *snif*so sad... |
 butterflyV 2006-08-24 . chapter 1 That was really cute, do a sequel to it please. |
 Elisabpshady 2006-08-24 . chapter 1Very good story.. very well written Lol |
 Vegeta's Female Clone 2006-08-24 . chapter 1Wow! That was great. It was so tender! I think I'm gonna cry!
Great job! |
 Haruka Ai 2006-08-24 . chapter 1Hey! That was a really nice one-shot, I have to say, one of the best DBZ one-shots I've ever read, truthfully.
It was well-written and flowed easily throughout the story, and its many paragraphs.
I thought it was very simple, but the simplicity was refreshing.
It was a calm story, without any conflict of the sort, but it was interesting none-the-less, and reflected Vegeta's inner feelings and thoughts about where he is now and what he has become.
Vegeta seemed in-character throughout the story, in my opinion, which is always a plus. This is actually one of my favorites, if not my favorite, of your many VegetaxBulma one-shots.
Good job. ^^
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Kari Usui,
Anna |