Hmm...Jude's slowly starting to fall for him already? I like...I wonder if Tommy will settle into being a one-woman kind of guy. Preferably with Jude, but hey, I like rushing things. Especially if it means Jude and Tommy are going to hook up and stay that way for a while. I wonder if Tommy made Jude go get condoms for him, just to test her to see if she'd actually do it. I know I wouldn't. And the whole thing with the cars? Dang, Tommy's rolling in money, isn't he? I wonder if Jude will ever think about driving off and leaving him stranded somewhere, and then he gets into one of his other cars, and they have a huge chase scene, only in this one Jude gets cut off by Tommy, and Jude and Tommy get out, and then Tommy grabs her and makes out with her, only to pull away and realize that Jude isn't like any other woman he's ever met, and Jude feels the same: that Tommy's unlike anyone she's ever kissed. Thus begins the endless cycle of Tommy and Jude falling for one another, but backing off at different times, so that one always feels heartbroken or confused or angry that the other one wouldn't commit to a relationship. But ignore my rant (this is the longest one I've ever had), and please PMS!

OMG! I can't believe Tommy would even think about Elizabeth while staring at Jude the whole time. Jude seriously needs to smack some sense into him! I like the name you chose for the hostess, by the way :o)! Anyway, PMS when you get a chance!

Liz

more soon please i really love it.

you're leaving? when will you be back? i don't think i can live without this story...PMRS!

omg the last post was funny pms

i would not mind that job well i love it pms!

p. the condom part..it was priceless i told my friends about that part!..they and i loved it!

Wicked story! Can't wait for more!

Lol this story is cute, I can't wait for the next chapter!

it's awesome and very original...UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Looks good so far!

Well You have my attention I would love to read more!

oh...i want more please!

Gab

Ooh, I like where this is going! Tommy might be used to changing his flavor of the week, but now he's going to meet his match. The one woman who can make him change from a chauvinist to a sensitive, caring kind of guy. BTW, Tommy's at least 6 or 7 years older than her. So he'll be 24 (give or take a few months) when she's been 17 for a while. This is awesome! You have to keep it going. Please PMS (post more soon), OK?

Liz

its very good pms

its good i loved it and i really hope it keep's going and i cant wait for your next chapter i know iam goindg to love it