Wow! That was impressive. I mean, the whole story - in rhyme.

Nice poem!! I love the way you told the whole story in such a short, yet interesting way (not one of my strengths)!!

I like the WOE series, and this was a pretty decent effort of summarising the plot of 'The Tombs of Atuan'

Since you seem to have a flair for descriptions, perhaps this poem could have used more visual, colouful images to illustrate the story.

Good work.