That was really well-written. I liked it toward the end when the sentences were made up of three adjectives describing Marluxia. And Namine questioning the feeling of what it's like to have no heart was also interesting. I really liked this one-shot. ^_^

...YAY THAT WAS GREAT!

It was awesome!! I love MaruNami pairings too. And I also wanna know who Marluxia's other was.

Wow, I absolutely LOVE it!

Marly-Waffles sounds so...Mature.

Unlike what you'd think of a guy that chose roses for weapons.

But, he's still cool beans.

Great job, I felt so sad for them both, given their circumstance. ;-;

Wow, you have Nobodies down so well. It's rather freaky, how well you described them. Naminé, the unfortunate girl, was acting a bit stupid. I thought her speech was good, though, but it didn't have the same effect on Marluxia, apparently. I knew from the start that the speech would not go over well. I mean, it was slightly depressing. And when I say slightly, I mean very. Naminé needs to stop getting herself into trouble. And making grand speeches about the state of everybody.
And fast. Very nicely done. I am sorry for the weird review, but it's late. And I'm tired.

Wow, that was incredible! Aww, I'm starting to really love this pairing. And I adore your writing style. More Marluxia x Namine, please~ xD

I really don't know what to say...You made me feel like I was actually in Namine and Marluxia's positions and had me experiencing the same things that they were...Really very well done. I can't put it any other way. Your stories reflect so much detail that it gives us, the audience, an amazingly refreshing read. Wonderful job.

Oh. I'm not a fan of the Marly/Namine (I can't see him paired with anyone, really), but this did it justice.

Despite what anyone else says, Namine is a great character. And, yes, Marluxia's nobody was probably hot stuff. XD

Yeah, Naminé sounds like she's really sympathetic towards the other Nobodies.She is also a Nobody herself. Personally I'm more a Marluxia/Larxene shipper myself. Whatever works for you is alright though.
Nice Ending!

"Either way, I bet he was hot stuff."

So gracefully put, I must say. :P

This was another enjoyable "Marluxia x Namine" one shot, and rather emotional. Thanks for the great read... :)

It was so great I cried. D:

♥ i like this; i like all of the ideas and feelings behind it, and the words that you use. ...also i like marluxia in the bathtub. ♥ i hope you link to this one on the marunami community, too; i think people would like to read it...! ♥

It's always interesting to see how the Organization ponders their existence.
Good one-shot.

Wow, I don't think I've ever come across a MarluxiaNamine pairing before. It was intriguing, and the fic itself was beautifully worded. Good job.

P.S. Doesn't Marluxia have pink hair? Just a question...maybe it's just light brown...