aw... that was sad :'( but beautifully written. Great job

That was really sad! And it was written beautifully. Incredibly difficult to read. (stylistic-wise and format-wise) I had to re-read it several times to catch the full emotion. You might want to cut a long paragraph in half...

You pretty much chose the best words and nailed it dead-on - exactly where its supposed to be.

But still...very deep emotion. Good job.

Very sad. Beautiful writing!

(sniffle) How sad. It brought tears to my eyes. Definately eligable to go into my C2.

Wow, that was sad. That was fun to read and a nice one-shot. It's hard to get people's emotions to feel real, but you pulled it off! *claps*

This was a beautiful piece. It expressed the feelings smoothly and it felt that I was zelda. Good job Contiue these type of beautiful work.

Aw **sniff** that was wonderful. You captured Zelda's feelings perfectly. I couldn't imagine living on like she did if I had been in her place. She really is strong. That was a wonderful story. It brought tears to my eyes.

Whoa. I never saw this side of her. This is great! Really it is! I mean, this is totally blowing my mind, I know it sunds cheesy but it's true, and it makes her side of the story so sad. But it makes sense at the same time too. This is awsome! :D Keep up the good work! Both of you! *thumbs up*