 FlintDjinn 2008-04-24 . chapter 1Grat story keep with good characters :) |
 Ultra Drama Queen 2007-10-23 . chapter 1This is exallent. Most exallent. I loved this story. Karen was so... random and drunk. Wow. It was helarious coz she was like "I don't wanna marry a fish" and "you only like me coz of my underpants". When I read that I was like omg that's helarious. This was funny and romantic. All I'm trying to say is I liked this. |
 Ekoaleko 2007-10-14 . chapter 1OMG. YOU ROCK. I'm serious. This is so hilarious XD I don't even like Kai x Karen, but I think you wrote the pairing wonderfully. I haven't ever played HM64 before, and in FOMT Kai is not really a gentleman... but I suppose he alters in other games. Veery nice oneshot :) |
 LadyBat-San 2007-09-30 . chapter 1OMG
This made me laugh SO HARD. XD
I love how you really captured Karen's... er.. drunkness? lol
Write more soon! |
 OhBrother 2007-09-29 . chapter 1*giggles* that one got lots of laughs from me! loved it.
-OhBrother |
 The Scarlet Sky 2007-03-14 . chapter 1 I didn't sign in... Anywho, it was amazing! My fav HM 64 pairing was Kai x Karen. Fantastic job. |
 The Tacochickenwings 2006-10-02 . chapter 1Aww...that was cute. And funny. "I won't marry a fish"... XD I laughed out loud. Great job! |
 Kittenscar 2006-08-29 . chapter 1u rock my socks. keep writing more HM stories! |
 GeorgiaPeaches 2006-08-26 . chapter 1Aww, nice one shot! I loved it. HM64 is one of the best, I think.
--Sarah |
 Pookie loves you 2006-08-26 . chapter 1You deserve more reviews!! This is such a cute story!! I never realized that Karen and Kai would make an adorable couple. Heh, drunk Karen is funny. I wouldn't mind if this turned into a chapter story...*hint hint* j/k do whatever you want. Keep up the good work! :D |
 Natsumi 2006-08-25 . chapter 1 ... |
 Melody262 2006-08-25 . chapter 1Hehe, I liked this. =D
It was funny and cute. Great job, Mel. |
 xuri 2006-08-24 . chapter 1Cute! ;D
Aw, Karen is cool when she's rambling about fish and marriage and ponds and underpants. xD Kai sure puts up with all of that well. They are a pretty cute couple - I can see how the chemistry would work there.
Anyway, very interesting one shot, very cute, made me smile. ^-^ You did an awesome job~~! |