dude this story is interesting and I hope you get some time to update it cuz I wanna know what you have in store for ren and tawny. good luck with school.

December-ish, huh?

*glances at watch, taps foot impatiently*

Oh man update soon I love it... Ruby is hysterical...

Check ya later

do hurry...

Please update...I really want to hear the rest it is so good. I seriously hope you update soon.

update cuz i love this ff

That sucks... although I know it wouldn't hurt me to spend a little more time on my studies too...but this is more fun and hey, writing fanfiction is a great creative writing exercise, not to mention it's better than, say, doing drugs, no?

Yay! An update! You've made me the happiest girl alive. I really like what you're doing with this story switching the POV around to show what each character is thinking. It adds so much to the story. Keep up the awesome work! I'm beside myself in anticipation for the next chapter!

Interesting technique, showing the same events through different POVs. Good start, update soon! I want to see what Tawny's intentions are.

Yes, do let the fun begin! Update soon!

Good start, very promising. I like that Tawny knows Ren has a crush on her, I'm interested to see how she'll play that. Update soon!

Oh and you might get more reviews if you allowed anonymous ones, some people don't like to take the time to sign in. I wouldn't have except that you reviewed my story and therefore I can extend the same kindness to you.

This is a good start. It's a twist to see Ren have to get tutored in something. I'm excited to see what Tawny's plan is going to be. Looking forward to your next update!

Aww, this is cute. I'd like that second chapter to be posted.