Told ya I would be back! This was a great story. Nene has a point in her diary, THEY ALWAYS KEEP PICKING ON HER!(Both in the original and 2040 version) You did a nice job both keeping to the original story, yet at the same time making it your own (I have the anime, I only recall a panel of the manga). As a certain scientist always says, "I will see you in the future!"