=D I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! It was kinda sad...but then again, Fullmetal Alchemistis also really sad... So this one is likeperfect!! I know you probly want this to be a one chapter thing...but would you mind making ONE more chapter!?

That was so beautiful and really marvelously written. At first, I thought it was just going to be another examination of the end of the series, but then it took its own direction and I just couldn't stop reading. I nearly started crying when Roy died, and all of a sudden there's one voice that says, "Colonel." And I -knew- it was Ed. My stomach dropped...and then when Ed said they were in-between, just waiting for "what came after." Honest, truthful, thought provoking. I loved it.

This made me cry a bunch.

And I don't even watch FMA.

Spectacular. :)

I can't believe you only have 20 reviews!-this is BRILLIANT.

That ending...was wonderful it was amazing-I AM SO SAD.
my stomach is knotted and I feel like I'm going to die-this was so sad-so very sad. And beautiful. And so well done. The whole thing...I read this in the dark and I am so sad and...MISERABLE.
Oh my god...
This really was well-done and I love the style.
But my god.
I am so sad now-MAES AND ED!-HOLY GOD! I am in a tizzy of sadness and just...this was great.

-sam 30 bath.

Holy shit. Ho. Lee. Shit.

THAT WAS SAD! That was SO sad it's almost unbearable. The ending was magNIFICENT! Your characterization was sad though accurate. Oh goodness.

This is a complete fav.

-Norngu.

Such a sad story, you have put the feelings well into words. Losing someone close to you is not something that can ever be forgotten, although the life goes on. And though things are different now, Roy has met Ed again and the latter does not blame him - maybe Roy'll stop blaming himself some day soon too.

*snif* You actully made me cry. Roy saved Hawkeye, and finally was able to see Ed and Hughes again. So he got his happy ending and I guess so did Ed. When you write and I read it, it's like a rolling picutre in my head, and I can't stop until it's finished.

Geez. *sniffle* You made me cry at least three separate times. It's rare that a story'll get me even shed a tear because they have to hit the heartstrings just the right way. This one. 3 times! XD

Keep up the amazing work! ^^

Very sad, but the ending was sweet. I really liked how close Al and Roy grew.

It's perfectly written to tell you the truth ^^
I was actually expecting for it to be like the movie of how Ed comes back but then has to leave, but I kinda know why you didn't do it like that since Al got children and everything. I liked the ending in the way where you don't need to write anything more...I never really expected for Hughes to be the one waiting for Roy and that makes it even more peaceful I would say.
I'm also glad that you didn't make Noah as Ed's wife, hehehe. I really hated her in the movie and to tell you the truth it would have ruined your story, or at least a lot of readers would have thought of it since a lot of them pretty much dislike Noah, so I really appreciate it ^^
Other than what I said, I'm so adding this fanfic to my faves ^^ Well done ^^

Hm. I like your version better than the movie.

I liked Al and Roy. That was a very sweet, father/son relationship.

I loved Li-Lian. She seems darling.

And I LOVED the end. Absolutely loved it. Adding Hughes there was perfect.

I loved this. Roy's interaction with Al was very touching, and I just felt his grief through the whole thing. (Also, Nessa sounds wonderful, really.)

Well written.

*sniffle* Like. Ah. You made me cry. Again! Damn. Like, fricking three scenes into it and I'm sniffling.

But I loved it so much! Write more like it! More more more!

Write it from Ed's POV. Or Al's. Or frickin Hayate's, I don't care, this was awesome!

You know. This is my favorite post-series fic EVER. It was AWESOME. Really, really awesome. I loved it! Write's Ed's POV!