This a very nice and creative train of thought that has never really manifested itself to my person. Kudos.

I love the idea behind this. It's really brilliant, and you pulled it off.

Dark kingdom hearts that DOESN'T feel forced and unnatural.

I think this is one of the best KH fics I've ever read.

Brilliant idea. Awesome fic.

I love an author who makes me think! That was a great fic. The best ones are the ones that start with an idea, an especially original and thoughtful idea, and really say something with it. Double kudos on this! I'm definitely adding it to my collection!

You might not be sure of how it turned out, but I am. It was GREAT. Awesome. Seriously kick ass.

This concept never even crossed my mind. But now I doubt I'll ever look at the game the exact same. Or Mickey. Seriously, how did you manage to make Mickey Mouse sound like a manipulative bastard?

*sits for a moment and contemplates*

ohmygodthatwassoawesome!

twisted and dark and I totally hurt for Riku in this. Add more!

O.O
that was wicked...
and creepy...
and omg..
awesome.
that was.
yeah.
and wow...
i ♥ this.

I like your descriptions in here, about the keyblades, specially Sora's. It's detailed and I can easily picture it in my mind's eye. It's almost dark but not quite but I suppose it gives out hints of what's to come when - if - KH I comes out. Kudos.

Hm... Interesting. Update soon.

~Kai

This is kind of scary...
And kind of makes you think...

I really like the thought behind this. Seeing it expanded upon would be great.

hm...i think it would be cool if you wrote more. i mean, now i wanna know what Sora feels when he uses the Keyblade Axel gave him, and Roxas's thoughts on it! and i think you did really great on this! so please write more! it's really interesting! ^^

Wow... I never would have thought of it that way. Twisted. I liked the descriptions of Kairi, Leon, Cloud and Riku.

This idea was astoundingly thoughtful and interest-provoking. I adore things and concepts and theories and the depth that goes into them, just like this one. If you expand, it would be awesome, if you don't, I love it just the way it is.

You brought up interesting points, smoothed your writing over into a compelling flow, and ended it with a clincher. This was absolutely amazing, thank you for writing and posting!

II

ahh man, that this is going to be suck in my head >.<

It all makes sence, >_>

Great story, and its well written too. *cookie* hehehe