Wow. I love your story thus far. It's very powerful, very intense. You detailed the story very well. It's just so sad how Riza keeps hearing and seeing Roy, but he's gone. I cried when she hears Roy's voice say "I'll always be with you." It was so sad. All in all, it is a wonderful story. Your composition is amazing. You really got all these ideas form the shower? That's amazing. you are so good. I'm in love with it so far. nice job.

That was a really enjyable and well written story! It had 3 great components: romance, action and drama. Well done and I look forward to reading more of your work! =]

wow intense i love it though

love it

cool story, just one question... what happened when roy and ed were alone that made him shake slightly when riza asked?

...This.. was beautiful T_T it was amazing, i was so engulfed in, the plot, it was like watching a movie or something. It was so detailed. I worship you ( not literally) thank you for this awesome story, this is one of my favorites. I literally stayed up till like 6 45 in the morning, finishing this story, this was awesome T_T =)

I love it!
You should SO do a sequal!

Awesome story. I liked it very much!

Who!! Way to go!!

That was a wonderful Royai story! One of the best I've ever read.

Whoa... that last scene- where Malice screams "DADDY-!" that was horrible. Like, it probably scarred him for life.
...again.

There ya go! THAT'S what the Colonel's good for! Blowing crap up! Yeaah!!

This kind of reminds me of CoS, where Roy had like, the best part in the whole damn movie. When he finally returns from the North just in time to blow up all the soldier/droids from Germany...MAN that was awesome!

Why is Ed always getting seduced?!! XD, jk.

omg ...That **!

wowz.
cat still here, but loved this chap

I still don't see how Ed is supposed to kill Roy... Unless the plan was just to get the both of them in the same place and then the homonculi will just jump both of them...?

I can't wait to see Ed's emotional reaction to Roy's return! I hope it's happy, deep down.

Yayy for Riza!
Whew. For a minute there, I thought he was telling her to wait, not follow him. I'm glad he didn't.

OK, CREEPY!! Ed really should've gone to see Hawkeye, especially now that Alice is trying to look like Winry! Eww, she's so creepy!