Nice, very nice.
I just watched the movie, and it made me crave New Moon fics. This was very good, the idea of everything that went through Edward's mind...wish you would continue on with Eclipse, at least a few parts, like when Bella almost leaves him out of her room, when she skips school to see Jacob, when they make that bargain regarding weddin and honeymoon, all that.
Anyway, as I said before, this was nice, you should write more.
See ya!

I absolutely love this story!

Hello, i've just finished reading this story, which I found on another author's favorites list. This was great. i love the Twilight series, and i've always been sad we never got to see things from Edward's point of view. He is the most interesting character in the books. This is the first Twilight fan fic I've read--I usually read HP fics. But I hope I can find more like this one. I enjoyed how you mingled quotes from the books with your writing. It flowed well, hung together very nicely. Great job.

Sherry

wow. this was a really good narration from edward's point of view. it was just...perfect. you did a truly awesome job. many times, i'd be reading it and i can feel my heart just wrench from the pain of edward's thoughts. and there were a lot of things you included from the novel that i had missed.. that alice had had a vision of bella ending her life if she was too late to save edward. thanks for including that part. i didn't even think that that thought could have come to alice a vision. also, you captured edward's personality really well, especially his tendency to overthink things. good job and thank you for sharing your talent with us!

Awesome.

I love the way you write! It is as if you were reading Edwards mind! This is my first time on fan fiction and I am so happy to have found this story. Thank you so much for giving a Twilight fan more info.

Aw, he FINALLY gets it! :) Still, poor Bella... :( Will you be doing Eclipse in his POV as well, or is this it?! A- overall!

really nice job. I think you kept to his character quite well as well as everyone elses

Thanks for telling us how Edward felt about Bella only love letter to Edward.

You're amazing! Edward's extensive over-thinking is written beautifully. I love how it's all so drawn out too. Most stories like this are maybe seven or ten chapters even starting with what Edward was doing those months he was away before going to Volterra. I applaud how thoroughly you've done this!

Sounds just like him. Agony, vocab, and the adoration. Very in-character.

So far it's good. Keep it up.

I can not believe how little reviews you have. This story was not only extremely well written, but completely in character. It was Midnight sun, New Moon edition.
You are so talented. Thank you for writing this. I really enjoyed it.

Great job - had me crying most of the way through. You really captured Edward (as have many on this site).

Your lack of reviews may have stemmed from how long ago you wrote this - seems Twilight just keeps snowballing into something bigger every day. I personally had never heard of it not paid any attention to the movie until just 2 months ago, and now I'm totally obsessed!

wow. i loved this.