lmao XD

Is this a comercial? XD

Holy crap, that was funny XD

Good job, really

Blaze

Haha cute!

I think it's good as a one shot, although change the last sentence if it is because it makes it sound like it will be more than that.

that was cool! I liked the shampoo twist, although I think you should have it rated at least T...lol

sb

hahahahaha that was good!

good one! cute

r u going to write anymore or is there only goin to be one chapter?

That's so funny. maybe you should do a second part with more inclusded or something