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Reviews For: Shadow the Hedgehog, the True Story

Burakku's Shadow
2007-12-28
ch 5,
abuseSorry to ** you off. Maybe next time you'll actually scare me.

Japanese Odd: *glares* "Be more polite."

Me: *sighs* "Fine..."

I'm sorry I made you angry, and I'm no better about updates than you.

Japanese Odd: "She doesn't know what she's talking about. She just registered in today."

Me: "Damn that two-day waiting period..." *storms off*

~Burakku's Shadow/Manjoume-Enchantress
SonAmy and ShadMaria fan
2007-04-20
ch 5,
abuseUpdate soon!! I look forward to more ShadMaria stuff!!

I love your stories!!
TwilightPrincess012
2007-02-03
ch 5,
abuseAwesome!
TwilightPrincess012
2007-02-02
ch 4,
abuseNice chappie!
Burakku's Shadow
2006-11-20
ch 4, anon.
abuseThizar: Awsomeness! Love Maria and Shadow being together. And the mode of depression Shadow begins to feel. Cooliness!
Burakku: Thizar, I think you can let go of Shadow now...
Shadow: *being held captive by me (Thizar)* ("If only I could kill you right now..." he growled under his breath, crimson eyes glaring)
Thizar: *strokes head quills* Be nice, Shadsie. Remember I cut my finger open, so be cutsie and... Something. *looks at swolen finger* ("Soon, I will destroy you..." I growled at my finger, green-blue-gray eyes flashing [yes, my eyes are all those colors in reality])
Burakku: Sorry, Kitty, Thizar's had far too much Dr. Pepper.
Thizar: But I have to drink the pib! My parents get angry with me if I don't.
Shadow: *looks up* I remember. Your dad actually grounded you for not drinking your soda yesterday. That was evil. *cracks a grin*
Thizar: Glad you think that. *beams*
Burakku: *slowly backs away* OO 'Kay... Shadow, look what you made her do, you hedgehog creation!
Shadow: Look who's talking, hanyou.
Burakku: *is taken aback* Oh, God... Why me?
Thizar: Awsome story, only a few spelling errors, and... Oh yeah, KEEP WRITING! Otherwise, I'll keep Shadow here captive.
Shadow: Kitty, hurry it up. ("She's killing me over here," he whispered under his breath, a hint of nervouslness detectable in his voice)
Mists of Shadow
2006-10-22
ch 3, anon.
abuseGood story so far has nice chapters please continue soon. I have no negative remarks about this story. Have you planned out the next chapter? Well please update soon!
Thizar's Shadow (GX)
2006-09-25
ch 3, anon.
abuseLove the story...far more discriptive than I can actually write (though I can go over the descriptions in my head but never be able to write them down). Kinda like my story, except it occures way after Shadow's created, and they (Shadow and Manjoume) never get a close relationship (mostly because they're both guys and it would look perverted (or worse!) with such a thing going on between them). The only thing that shows any relationship (in my story (will get back to yours sooner or later)) is that Shadow doesn't leave when Manjoume offers freedom and Shadow goes on a mission to save Burakku (1st Manjoume) from Howaito (2nd Manjoume) and Sartoreus(KILL THAT VAMPIRE BASTARD!).
Back to your story...:D Loves the Shadow and Maria relationship! KAWAII! (Didn't steal line, uses it in reality all the time...not really!XP) Keep up the good work. Looking forward to your next chapter!
Burakku: *stares at screen, hatefully*
Shadow: *looks curiously, slaps self for foolish action* *slaps me for writing it down*
Thizar: *winces in slight pain*
HURRY BEFORE THEY DECIDE TO KILL ME!
All except Thizar: *attacks vicously, tries shut down computer*
anynoums
2006-09-22
ch 3, anon.
abuseKeep Going! I love it so much.
TwilightPrincess012
2006-08-25
ch 3,
abusegreat chappie! I love this story! It's filled with Shadow goodness!
TwilightPrincess012
2006-08-25
ch 2,
abuseAnother good chappie! But Shadow and Maria!?!?!?!?!?!?!

2006-08-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseYAY! I found somebody who loves Shadow as much as I do! Cool language, I could never ever EVER come up with a language like that! Good chappie!
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