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Timeless Eclipse
2009-12-04 . chapter 1
I like the part about Auron. But what really cracks me up is
:Mom ya... That is funny I fell of my chair dying.
I also like the end Gippal's too cocky sometimes but that makes Rikku and Gippal a great couple!!
Miesie-chan
2009-04-19 . chapter 1
CUTE aw soo cute and funny =P
KazeCat
2009-04-18 . chapter 1
Aw. That was cute. And so funny!! Really easy and fast to read, that's a nice change (wouldn't want it all the time, though). And I liked the bit about Auron!
Anyways, keep it up.
Prince cl0ud9
2008-09-14 . chapter 1
AW!
That was just CUTE!
hyperactivesoccerchick
2007-11-13 . chapter 1
aw! that was so cute!
Kawaii Koneko92
2007-08-31 . chapter 1
Ahahahah! This was too cute. XD I think I fell over laughing over the cuteness.
deity of death1
2007-07-13 . chapter 1
LOL. Well, this just made me smile. XD I love the dialogue between them!! Haha, Gippal and his holier-than-thou attitude. :p
Addicted2Love
2006-10-29 . chapter 1
aw- that was really sweet! and funny! well done!
weixuan18
2006-10-16 . chapter 1
Just an ordinary conversation...HAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!~!!
Joon
2006-09-14 . chapter 1
Very good one-shot. Real cute.
louise
2006-09-04 . chapter 1
“You wanted an orange haired kid—“
“Colour doesn’t matter to me.”
“—with mixed roots and amazing blitz skills—”
“I’ll be proud with whatever skills it has.”
“—and greet you every morning with: ‘Mom, ya?’”

omg that was so freakin hilarious. I laughed my ** off on that one. "mom, ya?" hahahahha
japi-girl
2006-09-01 . chapter 1
This was funny! I love your sense of humor! This line was the funniest to me:
“Baralai’s cute.”

“So why don’t you go ** him?”

“What’s wrong with you?”

“I’m sure he’ll be okay with it.”

This story was funny and cute! Please write more like this!
Warui-Usagi
2006-08-30 . chapter 1
Cute! :D
Kocopo
2006-08-29 . chapter 1
LOL
cute~
*favs*
findingsanctuary
2006-08-29 . chapter 1
Ha! that's funny. I like the part with wakka! great job with the dialog.
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