Well, that's it. I'm dead. Your amazing writing style has done me in. Gorgeous, breathtaking, beautiful and in character. Perfect.

I read symatrey over at Teaspoon and followed the links posted to here to read this story. So glad I did. You have an unbelievable way with words. Like the ocean in your story they ebb and flow so easily taking the reader along for the ride. Sometimes its all calm and other times I'm caught up in the maelstorm of the Doctor and Rose's passion. I found it hard to remember to breathe sometimes. I see you have a followup story to this so am off to go read it now. Please continue writing. You are amazing.

Wowzee!

Vair romantic and all is groovily in character.

D D D D D

Good story. I love their connection!

I'd love a sequel. This story was amazing! May I also add this to my recommendation site?

YAY!

LOVED IT!

I think you should do a sequel.

If you do post it somewhere else, let us know!:D

Amazing! I'm simply blown away by this beautiful piece.

You are an awesome writer, keep it up!

some scholar or other said at some remote point in history or other that in science people have to find a way to eplain things which have never been realized before, things that are completely new concepts for others. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite. (um, so I did paraphase a little...) Whether that's true or not- I just think it's food for thought- I think you have a work of petry on your hands here. The way you described things about the cosmos, things that we don't understand and haven't even got to the point where we can determine if they're true or not- the way you did that was very orignal. It was fresh and effortless, although as a writer myself I know it could not have been effortless at all_. I tried to do a story involving mind- probing one time, and I remember that that part of it, at least, turned out very corny._ Nice job in not taking your story in the direction of corny, and in general having a great writing style_

sequel ! Please!

Sequel! Sequel! Oh yes :) Your writing is really lovely, all sweet, sensual, and a bit whimsy with a touch of magic. And I love how completely you draw we readers into each moment.

OMG, that was by far the best story i've read in a long time! i love it! corny, but not TOO corny if you know what i mean! congrats. xoxo

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! NOWNOWNOW!

Best story i have read in a long time! Yay!

Oh wow. I love your stories. This is lovely, well written - unlike most stories here - and beautifully warm and passionate. Love it. More please!

I think you should make a sequel to it. It's too good to pass up.

That was anazing. I really enjoyed reading it. I'd love you to do a sequel :D