Just had to go back and reread Next Gen again after catching up with FTA and HM. :)

You were right in saying that Parts 1 and 2 weren't quite up to the level of 3 and 4. I think it was sometime around the Boomer Summit section in Part 3 that you really began to hit your stride.

Boh certainly put Yumeko through so much. The psychological edge to his personality was a very nice touch on your part. A nice start to a really great series.

So this story finally made it to
I hope it'll get some more fans ;)

If only to make you write faster :P

Cheers!