keep writing please

Reading this story imediately after your last two Teen Titan stories is very interesting, illustrating how much you've changed as a writer. This is a much more polished affair in terms of writing ability. Practice really does make perfect!

There was a little mistake I found amusing though. You wrote Más and Menos' names as Más and Manos. That's funny to me since Manos is also a Spanish word, meaning "hands". It also brings to mind a horrificly terrible movie by the name of Manos the Hands of Fate.

Good work! Please update soon!

I know this story is going to be the greatest ever.
Keep up the good work Rahkshi500

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