Such a beautiful story! Allen feels so right in this story, down to the reason for his leaving the bed to die alone ... *sniff*.

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Beautiful.

I read this about a year ago, bookmarked it, then my computer died...and hunting through the junk on this site is a daunting task. But I had the overwhelming urge to read it again and so I went a hunting...

I just adore this story. I love how introspective it is, how its angsty without being romantic-angsty like people seem to put to these characters even though they're fighting something much bigger than teenage inter-relationship wangst. I love your descriptions of Allen, how he's such a martyr without feeling sorry for himself, and Lenalee, angrier at the world than most other depictions-and rightfully so. I love stories like this...that are romantic without actually being romantic-no necessity for "I love you" when it's spelled out right there in the narrative.

Really, a true diamond-in-the-rough of -man fanfiction.

I love this one! You really write well.

A very deep story. I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing!

i like this story a lot

but for some reason, it feels like there should be a little more to itchucklesstill love it though.

... receive the " just awsome" award hands down!

Aw! That was so good! Though I must say. That probably spoiled a whole friggin' lot.

hiya! i Just finished reading your story and i think its great!hope you continue writing stories coz they rock!

i LOVE it! it was introspective, deep, and BEAUTIFULLY CREATIVE! i could never have thought of allen's soul as a forest, and that his death lived inside him - it is curiously similar to phillip pullman's "his dark materials" theory of death. BEAUTIFULLY written!

OMG! That is so pretty.

one of the first stories i ever read loved it made me teary eyed the first time i read it hope you make more

That was an amazing story! I loved the descriptions soo much, and it was extremely well-written. You've also got a wonderful imagination what with Death and Hell and everything. Keep up the grreat job! haha..[is a dork] D

Ah, young love. The potenchal there is limmitless. Poor Alen has to suffer so much. But I guess this means the Future is still ahead. Undetermind.