Great fic. Short, but very nice. I really like your writing style and this fic was just simply great.

Sneaky, sneaky Randal. xD Great story and concept. x3

Very cute fic. I liked it very much, but I actually had to read it twice to catch on... Haha, but that's one of the reasons I liked it so much, surprisingly enought. Another thing I liked, what that this seems like it could happen. Like in dialogue between Randal and Dante. I felt it could really happen.

Anyway, I hope you write more DanteRandal in the future! Keep up the good work.

That was too cute, perfectly short and sweet.

I really, really like this fic. I had to read it twice before I caught on *feels silly* but... wow. This is a very clever and very cute story. It's really in-character and believable, and it made me go "aww..." thank you for making me smile )

This was a start. There was some good lines here and thee but the story needs to be fleshed out more... I hope you work on it... it has real potential... thanks for sharing!