 Juniperbreezie 2009-12-02 . chapter 5Great story. Loved it |
 Amethyst Princess 27 2008-07-10 . chapter 1Alien-turtle-from-hell... LOL!
great job,
Amethyst |
 Choas Babe 2008-03-22 . chapter 5I love George. Please, have more George stories. |
 LinziDay 2008-01-20 . chapter 5Excellent story all around. LOVED it. |
 LinziDay 2008-01-20 . chapter 3"I couldn't believe the Colonel. So I went crazy and protected a turtle from Carson's clutches. That didn't mean the mermaids didn't exist." Ha!!
Love the different POV's you have running through the chapters. All excellent. |
 LinziDay 2008-01-20 . chapter 2"So it was that I was marched to certain doom by two men too stupid to realize just how important I was and how bad an idea it was to sacrifice me to an alien turtle"
ROTFL... Okay, so it's 2 a.m. here and I can't go to bed because I'm laughing my head off at this story and it's only Ch. 2! Gah. This is fantastic. Worth every minute of sleep I lose. |
 LinziDay 2008-01-20 . chapter 1"Now some might say this is my own fault for going swimming in an alien ocean while injured. To them I say, once again, shove it."
LMAO! I'm only on Ch. 1, but I'm loving this so much I had to leave a review now rather than wait for the end. This is awesome! I love Sheppard's voice in this... sardonic, **, at points sappy and slightly medicated. Ha! |
 heartfallen 2007-11-24 . chapter 5It sure was an adventure to read this story. I loved George! Fantastic story and great imagination |
 Deana 2007-08-15 . chapter 5This story was great, LOL! :) |
 Keyanna 2007-06-26 . chapter 5“Carson,” John asked, “is it possible the mixture of genes could have caused memory loss?”
You have completely made-up science and I love it.
I'm also endlessly amused by the Ancient Insanity Virus (Carson will not rest in his quest to destroy the PURPLE!) and I loved the part where John and Carson each attempt to console Rodney when he has to part from George: Carson tells him he can visit, while John assures him that they'll just sneak him back again right away.
I liked Carson's perspective in this last story and found him very sympathetic. And of course he ends up liking George as well in the end. Who couldn't love a giant hundred-legged turtle with huge claws and nasty pointy teeth? Well, I suppose Kolya wouldn't. George would tear him to shreds. |
 Keyanna 2007-06-26 . chapter 3"He was sick so I had to send him to the mermaids" is now one of my favorite explanations of all time. |
 Keyanna 2007-06-26 . chapter 4It might well be because the page contains the word "turtle" in it, but at the bottom of my browser as I'm reading this I've got a little ad for - which, if it *is* a coincidence, is possibly the most awesome thing ever.
I'm a big fan of George! Anything that likes Rodney and has the ability to take down a strike force is all right in my book. Plus he purrs!
And incidentally, thanks for all the Rodney-whump and friendship in these stories. They bring me joy. |
 mandy 2007-02-17 . chapter 5 Loved this story! Loved George and his trailing along after Rodney, protecting him like a faithful dog and purring like one of Rodney's much-missed cats. |
 Kodiak Bear Country 2007-02-14 . chapter 5I like the expanded ending, very cute! And clowns LOL! |
 001ElvenWarrior 2007-02-14 . chapter 5Well congratulations on creating such an awesome creature as George! I loved him, the giant, many-legged turtle with claws he may have been - he still grew on me. :D Gotta love the turtle!
I liked how you brought it all together with the crazy Ancient; it was a nice touch, with a nice plot. Heh, insanity was a nice change for once, especially from Rodney. It would only figure, coming from the scientist. I also liked Carson's pov. It seemed very accurate of him.
Excellent writing! John telling Rodney his idea was insane at best, was just priceless, considering that John should take his own advice. Same with the turtle conspiracy of taking over the Puddlejumper. :D I enjoyed it, and I look forward to more of your stories! |