I really like this. I was a little afraid to start when you said you had not posted the ending, but I'm glad I took the risk. Well-written. I would love to read the rest, if you could please send it my way.

I like this story, it's nicely developed! Ah, my kingdom for an OC with flaws! Thank you!

Can you please send me the rest of the story?

I love your story so far. You may say it's plotless, but I feel like you've really managed to capture the personalities of the characters and yet still develop them throughout the story, which is really not the easy to do. I'd love to read the rest of your story. If you wouldn't mind emailing it to me, that would be great, thanks!

i like the story so far even though you said there is no real plot. can you send me the rest of it?

Tadoko sounds like a real wuss. Haha.

I loved this story! Could you send me the rest of the chapters through an email. I would love to read the rest!

im sorry it would not let me rr on the 5 ch anywhy I LOVE IT! could you e-mail the rest to me please!

wow that was cool will you pleaes e-mail the rest

h-how hawt!!

ah, it's been a while since i've read anything citrusy and unique! please, if you can, send the rest of it to this e-mail. i would love to read the rest of it.

I love it!

Brilliant! One of the sexiest things I've read in a while.

that was awesome cant wait for more AxM stories

ja ne!

Ah, this I particularly enjoyed. A good shocking to the heart, and if you can do that to me, it means it's good. I like how you brought in another man to make Aoshi realize his faults. Tadoko was a tipsy sort of fellow, but he still made Misao happy, which helped Aoshi. It wasn't like she was in love with a dolt, ne? Or at least not a complete one anyway. Good job all in all, an excellent piece for my favorite couple.

~HeavenlyTennyo

I think it's pretty good! And as far as plot goes, Aoshi and Misao becoming an item really IS a plot. At least to all of us in the A/M fandom! Nice one. Hope to see more stories from you soon! Hugs & Kisses!

Yes please I do want the rest! I love it... I think you wrote pretty well Aoshi feelings, and he's not an easy caracter to work with... congratulations

Hope to hear more form you soon