Very nice plot. I had always been wondering how Enrique had gotten his armour. COngrats on beating SoA, btw.

Wow! This is great! It's amazing how well you got everyone into character without even playing the game! It's nice to see a story that isn't Vyse-centic as well. Good job!

*blinks* Wow, that is really good. Enrique is so cute. Please, write more! Enrique stories are so rare... Poor guy. Link

Well, Teodora actually did something that benefitted someone else; I'm shocked. I loved your portrayal of Enrique and Gregorio. Keep up the good work!

Not bad, pretty good actually. Well I am not glad that you didn't play the game but still it's a good story. I practically worship skies and have written a few myself...well only one now. Anyway good story keep it up.

I'm really suprised that you could write such good stuff about a game you've never played. The characters, esspecially were really well done. Excellent grammar and speeling. This story was truly pleasing, I thought it would be lame when i first looked at the summary. The story didn't flow really well, but the other positive aspects make up for it.

That was good. _ I suck at leaving reviews, sorry.. But anything is better than nothing, ne? Keep writing _

*Finally*, an Enrique fic. :) Despite the simple subject matter, there's a lot of underlying problems (for lack of a better term) that are adressed and add interest. Cute story :D

That was a very enjoyable story. ;) Unusual choice of subject, and very well done. I like Enrique too! :)