Reviews for House Actually Cares

Jenna 2007-07-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey, I really did like your story but it'd be a much more enjoyable read if you'd placed all the dots where they belong. Like this is sometimes is just a long blablabla before you realize that there should have been that tiny little dot which indicates the end of a sentence. Other than that I did enjoy your story. Jenna
Juliet 2006-12-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt's called grammer.
HOUSEM.D.FanForever 2006-08-28 ch 1,	abusethis is cute, I liked it.thanks for writing it :) God and peace Vanessa :)
tkdblack 2006-08-27 ch 1,	abuseA cute idea for a story although parts of it could be developed more so it doesn't seem so rushed. (A little more dialog and back ground, etc.) Your grammar (sentence structure, punctuation, spelling), however, needs a lot of work. Many of your sentences run too long with too many ideas linked together. More breaks using comas and periods would make it easier and more enjoyable to read. Basically what this story needs is more polishing and you could have something really good. It is definitely a diamond in the ROUGH.
Emerald124 2006-08-26 ch 1,	abuseCute, thanks for posting!
Izzfrogger 2006-08-26 ch 1,	abuseCUTE:):):)nice oneshot:):):):):) xizzfroggerx
obsessedwithstabler 2006-08-26 ch 1,	abuseHa ha... that was very interesting. Is there any more?... Maybe the next chapter is a few weeks later, when House gets shot...