Aw, it was such a good story. Different from most that I've read, but not in a bad way. Wonderful job! ^_^

Whoa. I haven't read Loveless yet, but now I have to. This was a beautifully woven work of art.

One word: "Wow", nothing more need be said.

I absolutely adore this one-shot; it flows magnificently, and the words used together are so wondefully descriptive of Ritsuka's character.

sad, very sad

wow, this is one of the best loveless fanfics i have ever read.
good job
xx

Aw. That was wonderfully written. I loved that I could feel the emotion behind it. It was very vivid, I mean.

Good job.

-Ahria

I enjoy the writing style in this piece. It's very nice! You did a wonderful job! :3

I love unconventional stuff pulled off well. I love running trains of thought, parenthesis, italics, bold - which you managed to use well, and that's an automatic bonus point or two - and the like. You pulled this off wonderfully. There are so many harsh, beautiful lines that are simply too true, and I like how you address the darker side of the pairing - one that I tend to not care for anyway. It just flows like something lyrical, and...yeah, I don't really have much to say.

Faving, and stuff. Yep.

Sweet and sad. I like the last few lines especially- 'Ritsuka's life has a kernel of truth. "I love you."'

Lilz

Beautiful and heartbreaking.

I love all your writings. Its deep, poetic and sometimes dark and I absolutely adore it. I adore you.

Absolutely amazing. This piece was so sweet and tragically beautiful like an angel who can't fly because their wings are broken. I absolutely loved it and the 'I love you' brought tears to my eyes.

Love the written Japanese form of "I love you" at the end. AISHITERU!! ^_^

WOW, pretty good stuff. Love the way you wrote it. =D