|Reviews for Metanoia|
| lightanddarklove 9/1/06 . chapter 3
Wow. This story is amazing. I love how compasionate you've proven Vlad to be and how fatherly he is as well. Even though Danny's turned cold, he's still in charicter. I love how this story shows the sides we often do not see of our favorite half-ghosts. Exent work, keep writng.
Personally, I like to see gradual romantic relationships with most charicters and my DS fandom is no acception. Personally, I would see Sam as the type to like Danny first and I think it would be best to have Sam like Phantom as well, seeing as Valerie doesn't like him much (he needs to have some love right?). Danny's cluelessness is always a fun plot factor, and it adds a bit of well needed comedy to such an agnst ridden story, as I have not seen much and Danny Pahntom usually has a bit of every genre once in a while (there needs to be something to occasionally lighten the mood). I hope hese thoughts help, but feel free to make it your own, after all, you decide the final cut.
| CrazygirlwithaphonethatLOVESdp 9/1/06 . chapter 3
I LOVE you're story and Danny & Vlad are really IC. YOu did a good job in making a good guy Vlad while retaining his "charming" personality, you definatly make the story interesting. I have an suggestion about the Danny and Sam thing maybe sam could start out hating DAnny Fenten and liking Phantom 'cause i dunno Phantom saved her from killing her self or something (Sam being goth and all.) Then she starts to like Danny Fenten or Danny and Sam hate each other and are forced together by bizarre circumstance... OMG maybe SAM lives in Fenten works and her parents are paying the guys in white to set up their base in Fenten works and Sam hates ghosts!
WoW maybe I went a little overboard with suggestion oh well UPDATE i don't care what you write in the next chapter about sam and danny just as long as theres dxs im happy plus you're a really good writer so it'll be entertaining :)
| straywords 8/30/06 . chapter 2
.; That was another great set up is working well, and everything is believable.I look forward to the next chapter.
| asdfetragsdfat 8/29/06 . chapter 2
good story! update soon!
| vladimir's disease 8/28/06 . chapter 2
dis is going to be a long ficcie i can tell
| Black January 8/28/06 . chapter 2
Good Story so far. Please Continue and Update Soon!
| Danneh-n'Sam-4eva 8/28/06 . chapter 2
Please continue it was marvelous! When will sam be in the picture? I hope soon.
| soaring-bright-flame 8/28/06 . chapter 1
O_O I love it. So much. I don't even know what to say. But I'm putting it on my favorite list.
| straywords 8/26/06 . chapter 1
That was a wonderful start. I can't wait to see how this progresses.
| Straying Life 8/26/06 . chapter 1
Wow...this is sad. The stories that deserve recognition aren't getting them. And the complete and total spam stories are. Ugh. Yours is a truly unique idea. Although I just posted another CIA story (we writers love putting Danny in high governmental position, don't we?), this one is extremely unique. I love how you've maintained much of the original story's subplots in this AU. Valerie still doesn't know who Phantom is, yet she's surrounded by him and actually has to work with him. Vlad is involved...wow. Just, great how you set that up.
Wonderful flashbacks within the story. I've seen SO many stories that have failed at that. You put them in wonderful places. Right between the first move and the real action. Like, the flashbacks are in the calm before the storm. And you write them in such a way that makes us keep in mind that he's a freaking CIA agent on a mission!
That being said, sometimes certain background information need not be revealed immediately. I, for one, enjoy covering up Danny's past until the climax of the story just so that I can bother whoever's reading it. That, and...it seems to just work well with the story. You could leave out Phantom's past. Only give us bits. For instance, the hints you gave at his past before (like apprentice, etc.) are useful and plentiful in themselves. Unless you have a specific reason for revealing so much past information at once, I wouldn't do it...sorta disturbs the flow.
Overall, well done, and I hope SOME good stories get their well-earned recognition!
| kia 8/26/06 . chapter 1
pls update i want danny to meet sam