That story was messed up.

Did you know, that practically all your sentences made little to no sense? Did you not reread your story before posting it? Here I'll even give a few examples:

"To I come to here work at Daily Planet!". . . like. . wtf?

Im sorry, but, there's just no excuse for that. The entire story pretty much, was retarded.

If you fixed your sentences, it would suck less.

Interesting writing style but... very confusing, I could hardly follow it, no offense. Other than that it was a cute story, i like the plot... other than the fact the Clark's with Lana...

Aww, that was a cute story! I liked it, because even though Clark and Lana are together in it, there's also a lot of Clois, and even a tad bit of Chlark. Very nice. Write more soon!