really good so far

good job

Interesting story. Kinda confusing at times, but overall, good.

it's mrs. nightwing, not mrs. nightingale

good story!

but you never wrote that they had sex in the last chapter...did you?

Really cool story! Please continue.

A reminder, her name is Mrs. Nightwing.

more! im so sad that its over 4 now...

omk! i waz blushing the whole time! u are a truly gifted writer!

You promised more! You PROMISED! Where's the rest? Please update! SOON! Please please please please! YOU PROMISED! PROMISED! You wouldn't break your promise would you? I hope not! Update please! I'll be waiting...er...not so patiently but I'll be waiting! D

So I'm like totally LOVING this! Can't wait to read the other chapters! I bet they're like totally AWESOME!

And no, I don't normally talk like that. I'm just feeling a bit too giddy from this new G/k story...Keep up the writing! You're great at it!

PLEASE UPDATE!

Your story is very intriguing so far!

Madam,i trust that you will keep your promise for more!I love your story!

Your story is really, really good. :D

Please update soon?

Your plot is very original and sounds like it will be getting very good in upcoming chapters xD

This chapter was really well written.. it shows you have a lot of potential as a writer. Some of the sentences were fantastic; kinda artistic I guess xD

I love this pleas update!