umm, i don't think you needed the rating to be M. T probally would have been fine.

Aww. I love it!

Short, sweet, and to the point! ^^ Very nice, I likey very much!

KT

No Renge! Back away!

That was really short, but I liked it. Building it from that phrase was a good idea, it fit well, good job!

ah *sigh* soo cute!! you gatta write a follow up or sumthing with more details>

cute idea, you should expand on it.

aw...this was sweet but i feel so bad for them! ^_^

This was good.

Aw kind of sad. Really sort! I wish there was more detail, but then again I do like it for being simple like that. :D Aw, I think it's sad because they are trying to hide such a love. Keep it up!

I thought it was cute ^_^
Good job.