 Psycho Tangerine 2007-10-25 . chapter 7Ooh, those are evil morphers. Yep, I refuse to believe Alex would kill anyone, that morpher made him do it. I assume Lucas had that memory because he's attached to Zeph through the blue morpher. This is really getting spooky. |
 Miss Lizzy Bennet 2006-08-26 . chapter 1Nice start! I may say that it was really surprising for me when I read that it was a fic about Jen and Lucas, but yet, I really liked the way you wrote it.
The details you wrote, fascinated me,it was so natural, that I could imagine it perfectly. And other aspect that called my attention, was the characters' personality, it was very well written, especially Jen's personality.
The last scene, surprised me very much, but I really appreciated it, another excellent job from you! Jealousy is a difficult feeling to write about, but you did it perfectly well.
I'm anxious to read the next chapter! I hope you update soon!
Excellent job! |