“Simple,” he replied. “I did not panic and made a plan.”

Orochimaru. You made OROCHIMARU, of all people, seem awesome for that one brief, shining moment. I'm not sure whether to salute you or kick you in the shin.

hahhahaha omgoshh i am surprised i didnt just pass out from oxygen deprivation because i was laughing so hard
this is pure freaking genius :]

HAHA! OMG! I couldn't stop laughing haha. Hehe, Tsunade in a tricycle, Oro as a clown. Haha. I loved the part where Oro tried to smile and Tsunade commented that he is suppose to smile not look as if he was going to eat the boy up and then Oro thought the boy was too scrawny! Haha. You're like the best writer ever! Hehe. I love your fics =p You sure have talent =p =)

*dies laughing*

Pure Genius. You are now my favorite author. XD He nodded and walked by, pinching her butt (ahem) before running off.

Jiraiya was going to die.

OMG, that was hilarious! I couldn't breathe I was laughing so hard! -wipes tears away- This was just too funny...

Brilliant! Lol, really though this was an awesome fanfic. A real funny one too :)

...zomg, Orochimaru the clown.

This was hysterical--I nearly got myself kicked out of the computer lab because I was snickering so hard.

I really liked it.

Excellent story.

Very amusing antics by the sannin, just like Jiraiya to pull stunts like that.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Lol, that story is genious. Pure genious. Very well written. I liked Orochimaru, he's cute in this story. Well done.

HAHA! Nice story, I found this very funny but serious at the same time. I can just imagine the three in this situation...poor Oro! And Jiraiya! You captured his personality perfectly! Awesome job! Very well written and such a wonderful idea, something I never would have thought up! Now for the Ice cream! XD

i love how this team works!

Cute! Hehehehe.

This fic is awesome. XD It's hard to say what I like best because there were lots of things I liked, but I think this line tops them all:

/“Simple,” he replied. “I did not panic and made a plan.”

A plan, which would never be known to his teammates as it involved some rather girly screaming and dumb luck that the platform he stood on had slipped through the hole at the top of the tent and thus remained untoppled./

Ne'ermind Orochimaru as a clown, but that's priceless. Nice job!

Ha! Love it. There are precious few fics centering around the Legendaries, much less in their childhood years, and the dynamics between them were hilarious. Silly little Orochimaru..."It's a snake." Pure genius.