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| Neopets Freak 2007-01-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseWell, this is an original concept! I found it particularly amusing that they were all riling each other up to help the others get control of their chakra. Do hope you continue! ^^ |
| Any-more-cheese 2006-09-11 ch 2, | abuseYay an update! Yoko that was excellent! Oh and I didn't see any typos! yay! *claps*...ths fic deserves a lot more reviews Yoko, its so good...Well, Cheese can't make people come and review but Cheese can review! Mwahaha! Anyway...that chapter was really great! Cheese loved it! Uh a class?...Ok...then Genjutsu, I have no idea if I spelt that right, lol. Well I guess I must go now, can't wait for your next update, ta ta! |
| Kidd 2006-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseViewing the characters at an older age and at a remote school seems very interesting. At lot of information are different from the original story so I have to adjust that. I dont know what you have up your sleve, but I can't wait to see more of your works. |
| Any-more-cheese 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuseAw! I love it Yoko! Great first chapter! You had fav charrie in there too, yay! While I was reading I only noticed one small typo, so very good! I usually make loads...^^' Anyway can't wait for your next chapter, Bye! Cheese xx |