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Reviews For: Sweet Temptations

Neopets Freak
2007-01-06
ch 2, anon.
abuseWell, this is an original concept! I found it particularly amusing that they were all riling each other up to help the others get control of their chakra. Do hope you continue! ^^
Any-more-cheese
2006-09-11
ch 2,
abuseYay an update! Yoko that was excellent! Oh and I didn't see any typos! yay! *claps*...ths fic deserves a lot more reviews Yoko, its so good...Well, Cheese can't make people come and review but Cheese can review! Mwahaha! Anyway...that chapter was really great! Cheese loved it! Uh a class?...Ok...then Genjutsu, I have no idea if I spelt that right, lol. Well I guess I must go now, can't wait for your next update, ta ta!
Kidd
2006-09-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseViewing the characters at an older age and at a remote school seems very interesting. At lot of information are different from the original story so I have to adjust that. I dont know what you have up your sleve, but I can't wait to see more of your works.
Any-more-cheese
2006-08-27
ch 1,
abuseAw! I love it Yoko! Great first chapter! You had fav charrie in there too, yay! While I was reading I only noticed one small typo, so very good! I usually make loads...^^' Anyway can't wait for your next chapter, Bye!
Cheese xx
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