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Reviews For: Humanity's Survivors: Perfect Edition Part One - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

roger
2008-10-10
ch 2, anon.
abusedid you give up on this story its great so far you gotta continue
Olaf74
2008-07-29
ch 1,
abuseI'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
Richard-3116au
2008-03-31
ch 2,
abuseReally enjoyed this. I was never a big Robotech fan even though it was a favorite with all my friends. This story makes it all interesting and new.

The plot is exciting, the characters fresh and the action scenes very well done. I note that the story is abandoned and would encourage you to continue.

Anyway thanks for sharing and I look froward to reading your other work.
melgar
2007-12-14
ch 2,
abuseo please tell me your going to come back to this

the only faults i can see with this is how you prosented it

1 there is at least 6 chapter worth in these two chapter and more

2 place this in the battelstar and roboteck and the reveiws will shoot up
JovianJeff
2007-11-04
ch 1,
abuseSorry for reviewing this in reserve, but both chapters deserved their own spot worth mentioning. Loved how the SDF-1 was used, from the Destroids to what the Colonials call the BFG. I absolutel loved how the SDF just kicked Cylon tailgate. Wonderful high points with action. Nor were characterizations lacking, they were portrayed well with good interactions between them. I see you have gone with the pathos school of thought with some of them. What Rick and Lisa went through with Helena Cain were horrific, yet perfectly in keeping with how she had been in canon. Part of that horror was how she is likely to get away with it by the way it was set up. And then there is what you did with Mimei. I know not a fan favorite character, but I'm not sure any character deserved to go through that. Very disturbing. All in all a captivating tale that had me thinking about it long after I finished reading it.
JovianJeff
2007-11-03
ch 2,
abuseWow. That was really good. Reviting, and very depressing. Good tale though.
reader
2007-10-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseStop! using! too! many! exclamation! points!

Try using the period more often.

Cheers.
Shawn Pickett
2007-06-07
ch 2,
abuseOutstanding story, it's a real shame you don't plan on doing more with it.
Arashihawk
2007-05-02
ch 2,
abuseGreat Crossover. I've been looking for a Battlestar-Robotech for a while. I really what you have done with the story so far. Looking forward to seeing what you have planned for everyone.
deitarion/SSokolow
2007-03-10
ch 2,
abuseQuite possibly the best BSG fic I've ever read. I look forward to seeing what happens next... very much so.

For the record, it's the following that interest me: (in reverse priority order which also happens to be inverse chance of finding such a thing in a fic)
- The SDF-1 techno-wizardry
- Exploration of Cylon culture as well as Cylon defection and dissent
- What appears to be Minmei being resurrected in a new Cylon body.

Keep up the good work. :)
Tony the jew
2007-02-12
ch 2,
abuseGreat stroy, love the how long the chapters are. up-date soon
skywiseskychan
2006-12-28
ch 2,
abuseYou earn bonus points for putting in Maniac from Wing Commander as a pilot trainer. I even recognized the name before the missile barrage.

I really do like how your having the story move along. I did see several options to limit the number of zentradi availible but you've clearly chosen to take a differnt route. What interests me is where your going with minmei as 13, baltar's 6 being able to actually move him outside of his own body, and of course how anybody is going to survive the zentradi at this point.
Tatsu-ZZmage
2006-12-17
ch 2,
abuseHEHEHEHEHEHE Fracking awesome. ^_^
LOVE IT, I truly can't wait to see more of this.
Sojourn
2006-12-15
ch 2,
abuseI am still not sure how this story only has such a small amount of reviews. I think it is frakin awesome how you handled the crossover of Macross\Robotech and the new Battlestar Galactica. I have only seen one other Robotech\BSG cross and that is based on a post 3rd generation/sentinel timeline.

BTW I loved your Wing Commander cameo of Maniac. He is definitly one of the best characters from the series. Every other character from that series just wasn't as dynamic, with the exception of maybe Vagabond, but then they killed him off. So if you were going to bring any other characters over from WC, I would like to see an appearance from him.

The level of detail you are going into is great. I really liked the depth you went into the trial for Helena Cain. For some reason, that struck me very much in tune with how the new Galactica series is.

That you had them discover the protoculture matrix was a very interesting turn of events. I am interested in seeing what direction you take that in, in regards to the higher power behind the workings of protoculture as hinted in the Jack McKinney books.

Please keep the great work and I hope more readers come across your story.
Starclipper01
2006-12-14
ch 2,
abuseGood story and great plot.

However, you might need to get a beta to go over some misspellings.

You had Cdr Terris' first name from Fila to Fela to Fina.

There were other spelling and grammatical errors but they weren't enough to interrupt the flow of your story.
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