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| MrsYokoKurama4life 2008-04-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseOK! I am so confused I was reading the first chapter and my brain could not keep up... like right here “KURAMA I’M SO SORRY HE WAS GOING TO KILL ME IF I COULDN’T GET THREW TO YOUR MOBLIE!” Botan cried “It’s alright Botan. Just let me talk to him.” “Alright but he’s pretty mad at you, I warn you….(Koenma) KURAMA WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN! I HAD TO SEND THE REST OF THEM OUT WITHOUT YOU! ” he yelled into the phone. “Just calm down Koenma, remember I told you I had something to do with my mother today.” Kagome looked at a bus sign to see when the buses ran when she heard him coming back saying something about a jackass or something like a demon. “So where do you want to go?” He asked happily, as if he was never mad. “I don’t know you pick!” Kagome answered. With Koenma “He gets so scary when he’s mad.” Botan said from behind a desk after they hung up with him. “I’ve only seen him like that once.” Koenma said to himself. “I need you to help a boy named Yuske Uremeshi.” Koenma said to Kurama. “Fine but in return,” He grabbed Koenma by the collar. “You can find anyone right? Find a girl named kagome!” “Who is this Kagome Higurashi that I found.” Monday “Okay mom, I’m going to the past.” “Okay, but what about Suichii?” “What about him?” Kagome asked grabbing a bagging and thinking what kind of fruit she should bring. “What do you think about h You start talkin about one thing then you start talking about another thing I know this story has been finished 4 a long time but It would be reaaly great if u could clarify things with me because I dont think I can finish this story |
| run away Hamster 2007-12-05 ch 17, anon. | abusesorry I tried to review to each chapter but I really wanted to know what happened next and forgot to click the review. It was a really good story but lots of mistakes so you may want to edit it. Run Away Hamster |
| run away hamster 2007-12-05 ch 11, anon. | abusecool |
| run away hamster 2007-12-05 ch 10, anon. | abuseI think this one of the best chapters |
| Run away Hamster 2007-12-05 ch 9, anon. | abuseyea! He's going with her! |
| Run away Hamster 2007-12-05 ch 8, anon. | abusewow, your mini story was kind of creepy... |
| Run away hamster 2007-12-05 ch 7, anon. | abuseYea, it was longer! But I can't wait to read what happens next!! |
| Run away Hamster 2007-12-05 ch 6, anon. | abusewow lots of drama |
| Run away hamster 2007-12-05 ch 5, anon. | abuseAh! There going to fight over her! |
| Run away hamster 2007-12-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseOh no! what is he going to do? |
| Run away hamster 2007-12-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow this really was short, but I want to ask why you never seem to CAPS Kagome's name? |
| Run Away hamster 2007-12-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseYouko came in! |
| Run away hamster 2007-12-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseCool, I'm really liking it so far |
| kikyo's killer 2007-07-26 ch 8, anon. | abuseliked it |
| kohaku's #1 hater 2007-07-26 ch 6, anon. | abusestory was okay for me, a lttle on the dull side |