Wow. It was really nice. I loved the story, and the way you made the song a crucial part of it...
Soon I'll start reading your other ToS fics. Viva Sheelos!

It made me go 'aww'. I am seriously addicted to Sheelos fluff. And the song was pretty...^^

Why can't I write as good as you? >.<

"I’m such an IDIOT."
BAKA

SUCH A GOOD STORY!^^ heehee...its not christmas yet but still!:D keep up the good work...SUPERKITTY!

Great story! Yours are the best! I love Sheelos and you are a very good writer! You never dissapoint me! I hope you can write more! ^^

Aw, that's a really sweet ending. And a really sweet story in general. ^^ I enjoyed reading it a lot. I will admit that the writing seemed a little awkward at times (the beginning, mostly), but I can't quite put my finger on why that is. You may have mixed past and present tenses at a couple of points... but I'm not sure. And the last sentence, "I wanted to all them with you." I think that a word may be missing in that phrase, but the point was definitely made clearly nonetheless. =D I hope that you keep writing!

awesome! i loved it!