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Forgot To Breathe
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
haha this is a very cute story! i give you full props! a few typos here and there but everyone has them :) and you already warned me so im not complaining lol i LOVE this! naruto sasuke and sakura are so great! that was REALLY unexpected! i wasnt even thinking about them so i when i first read i was like whoa! haha im going to read til the end and then i shall give another review! very intriguing! XD
Dinesha
2009-10-09 . chapter 13
now that was a really good story...i did see some errors with words and a few phrases...but nothing too bad...you are a really good writer...keep up the good work ^_^
reader
2009-09-22 . chapter 13
Yay!done! it's wonderful!
now,i'd like some of the 'clueless teachers' thing!I love that stuff and u haven't updated in a while now!i'm getting really worried!are u going to finish it?
Behan
2009-09-14 . chapter 13
another amazing well written story...totalyl love all those cute and little quirks between kakashi and iruka...and naruto and sasuke is just adarobel too!
Shatatomyo
2009-08-30 . chapter 13
Hello!

I read your story all the way through before sending you this review. I absoloutly loved your story, but you have a LOT of mistakes. If you would, I would be honoured if you'd let me edit your work. You can say no, so don't feel bad if you'd rather not, but please tell me your answer. Other than that, your quite the plot genius =3
*Shato-chan
mollypocket
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
Hahaha. Of course it was the trio. lol

Yeah, Kakashi... cold medicine. That's what you need... right.

Nice.
Avenasoblivion
2009-07-14 . chapter 13
That was so unbelievably cute! I just loved how you took a lot of what you read in other KakashixIruka fics and made it adorably awkward, like the whole "unmasking" thing. Just avert your eyes and try to act normal...Totally refreshing.
firedraygon
2009-07-11 . chapter 13
So sweet! Hee, I really love how flustered Kakashi was at the beginning, when he couldn't even look Iruka in the eye. Fantastic work with this~!

~fd97
Fire x Ice
2009-07-09 . chapter 13
This is a great fic! So funny and sweet :)
kingleby
2009-06-27 . chapter 13
brilliant story! you write the couple so well, and all the characters react realistically ^_^ good job!
Goumi
2009-06-23 . chapter 5
Damn it! I wanted Mr. Iruka to get ** and angry at Kakashi! It's one of those, I know this makes the story better but I just wish he would've gone and done an UPPERCUT, moments.
ARGH!
(vents anger on pillows)
Goumi
2009-06-23 . chapter 4
Agh! The way you wrote this- all from Mr. Iruka's point of view- makes me so nervous- in a good way! Great job, but it makes me so edgy!
Goumi
2009-06-23 . chapter 3
Ack! Poor Iruka!
Goumi
2009-06-23 . chapter 2
If the team is just screwing with poor Iruka, I'm going to kick their asses.
I don't know how, but I shall!
maria
2009-05-16 . chapter 8
this is honestly one of the most depressing stories i think i've ever read on ffnet. i hate bigots.
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