 SexyDemonGirl5000 10/21/06 . chapter 5please continue! But can u make the chapters longer please? |
 Guardian Munny 10/1/06 . chapter 5I hate cliffies! Why does the boy want maidens...? O_O I think I know! EW! Bad immage. Dirty thoughts! Argh! UPDATE SOON! |
 Guardian Munny 10/1/06 . chapter 4Argh! Cliffies are evil! If you're not the one putting them in! |
 Guardian Munny 10/1/06 . chapter 3OOH! I like! |
 Guardian Munny 10/1/06 . chapter 2This is so awesome! |
 Guardian Munny 10/1/06 . chapter 1OH! I can't wait to see what happens! |
 eDWaRd1 10/1/06 . chapter 5OH suspence! P Please write more soon!
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 Avelyn Lauren 10/1/06 . chapter 5Actually it sounds as if this is an illusion/test for the boys but the girls are still trapped. I'm curious. I'll talk toyou later. Arigato and ja ne! |
 eDWaRd1 9/24/06 . chapter 4Lol wtf? r they in something's mouth er wut? /:) well update soon!
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 Avelyn Lauren 9/24/06 . chapter 4What jsut happened? I'll talk to you later. Arigaot and ja ne! |
 beautiful-illusions13 9/24/06 . chapter 4whoah that was awesome! update soon please! |
 Taeniaea 9/24/06 . chapter 4I Love The Chapter:4 Plz Plz Update It Soon! |
 articfire69 9/9/06 . chapter 3love it, can't wait till the next chapter. keep up the good work. |
 SexyDemonGirl5000 9/9/06 . chapter 3Love it! please continue! |
 Taeniaea 9/9/06 . chapter 3I Love The Chapter:3 Plz Plz Update It Soon! |