Another great chapter! And so soon! this morning i tried to read it, but even though on the chapter thing it said twelve chapters, when i opened the story there were still only eleven! It was extremelly frustrating! Thankfully it worked tonight somehow.
Did you make up the 'blindness of the sands' thing?
Please write some more soon!

*squeals* MY absolute fav! I love it that Jonathan has a moment to shine! Ok that's it I'm adding you and your story to my favorites! This fic is just absolutely wonderful!
Please Continue!
SilentTrainConductor

I am extremelly glad you decided to continue with this story- it's really, really good. When i first read it it hadn't been updated for ages and i thought that would be the end of it, although i was dying to know what happened! You left it at a real cliffhanger. Thanks for continuing and please write more soon!

OO so Rick has sent off for Ardeth huh? Hm...interesting. I can't wait for more! I can't believe you updated so fast, ah well I won't get my hopes up for the next chapter coming in faster - You take your time, this fic is wonderful!
Continue!
-Silence

This fic is wonderful! I love how you captured everyones' characters really well! It's no wonder people wanted you to continue this! I want you to continue this as well! It's so wonderful! You can count on me being here till the very end! I do hope you continue and I won't have to wait a year to see the end But even then, I'll still be here (hopefully) )
-Silence

You must continue this. If not, at least give a third party full permissions to contiune in your place, because this story was absolutly fantastic. I was thoruoghly impressed. It was horribly dissapointing that upon reading the last line, I was left hanging.

ps. do contiune, because I have type this for Gia, due to the fact that she is experiancing a current lack of computer access.

thank you,

Miss Yelena S.

eeekkk!

This was a great story! Please continue!

That was one of the best stories I have ever read. Please, please,please, please, please, continue!

(assumes kneeling position)

please?

THIS STORY KICKED BUTT! PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE, PLEASE, WRITE MORE!

very cool story please continue soon

LOVE IT PLEEEEEAAAASSSSEEE WRITE MORE SOON

Nice story. I like the fact that there are others who know about some ancient Egyptian curses and magic in the story. I can't beleive he used magic to blind her. Please continue as soon as possible. Spelling check: artifacts.

Keep Going!

i loved until the end. make her fall in love with rick make her dump nathan, skrew the blind part and delete the section...etc... thanks anyway...i kinda liked the rick parts.