Ya, thats nice *Sarcastic tone*. JK, I really thought it was funny, and I bet it will be funnier if Ed meets her, I really, really, REALLY LOVE IT!

Great Story!

GETTING REAL GOOD!UPDATE!

Hurry and update! Your story is really good!

This is a cute and sad story. Please continue. Ed and Winry forever.

Its good. Real good.

Hey, this is a pretty good story! I dobn't understand why this has so reviews, cuz this story has a great plot. Also, the characters are pretty much acting the way they would have in those situations, so you're cool.

I'm writing an FmA story, too(EdxWin)- my very first one, and right now I'm also on a sort of writer's block, so I can understand what you meant by your dilemma. Anyways, I'm still going to be a TEENY bit selfish and beg...

PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!

L8R, yo!...and no hard feelings, right? ;) XP

Ok, from a scale of one to ten, I'll give this 9, because u killed of Winry! (I know, I know, pretty much the storyline, but still...)

It's good from what I can tell, just describe more.

You want to pull in your readers, so describe her surroundings, describe her feelings more in-depth.

But otherwise, it's good. x3

Cool! I love this. Update soon!

It's a sin (no pun intended) to write an EdxWinry fic without romance XD I really like what you have here, but you might want to add more details and make things flow more. I won't say, "Write longer chapters" but things go along nicer if the chapter was at least three pages (microsoft word, spaced between paragraphs). Just a suggestion. Looking forward to your next chapter D

wow

Ha i have finally read it. and it is really great. You should continue..muhah she cut envy's head off..that is what the pervert gets...-slaps envy-

Or course there needs to be humour. Afterall it really wouldn't be FMA without Envy doing something perverted or weird snicker.

I only have one suggestion. Maybe you should describe Syn's new appearance. Most of the Homunculi look corpse-like and have "interesting" outfits. So how does she look?

No not Winry! Anyone, but her! sob Well, maybe "anyone" is a bit melodramatic. This is a good start. I can't wait for Ed to bring her back. Very interesting! _