|Reviews for Hope|
| Alex Warlorn 4/5/07 . chapter 1
I'll give it credit for having a beginning, middle and ending, and for the number of words it's written in, it gives feelings and character, though there are a few unanswered question that leave the reader slightly confused.
This is a rather different side of Ihreli, whose normally a self serving, shameless bully. What inspired this act of kindness on Irene?
And why is Fam so bouncy and the opposite of cynical Irene if she'd been put through the meat grinder like that?
Just thinking out load in ways that can help improve your writing, thank you.