That was superb!

Brilliantly done. Rarely do I find a fic that has the three of them together like this.

Utter Perfection.

I would love to see more Kingdom Hearts from such a wonderful writer.

Well..um...Where is this story going?

I really like your characterization. And I like the idea behind it. It was very good.

Fantastic. I've never seen Anti-Form portrayed that way in a fic. Gives me serious regrets that there was never any real story element to the drive forms in game.

Well done!

I really like the way you portrayed the three of them! - Great story!