Okay first of all that was awesome second of all its 5:22 in the morning. I stayed up all night to read your Fan-Fic because it is that awesome.Now I don't know if you have written a sequal yet but if you haven't then you need to. gtg bye


ps. your a genius.

My friend & I think that you should do a sequal cause OC's are just cool like that... and I miss that pillow thing.

And I do like Keiko in this story and stuff, and the fact that absolutely everyone was after Kimiko. It was fun

Sequal would be fun... You'd have to do something with it though - some sort of problem so that it's not just 20 chapters of purified fluff.

have fun with it.

I would like a sequel.

Talking pillow? Reminds me of Wooya. Shippo Out!

awesome really cool idea! you story was really fun to read. ^_^ very swwet. >_

I LOVE THIS STORY! IT WOULD BE AWESOME IF U MADE A SEQUEL! PLEASE DO IT!

This is definatly one of the best stories I've ever read. I started reading it then got side tracked so I came back and read it all. I loved it. A sequal will be great :)

AW! This story was so cute! Great job! A RaiKim classic ;) Once again great job!

~Tgurl~

sequel sequel sequel sequel!

OMG!OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
OMGOMGOMG! IT'S OVER I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! The ending was so cute! With Keiko and Derek and Kimiko and Raimundo! ~sigh~ so romantic and cute! (And a drop of humor when rai walks inhis underwear. Funny!) I LOVE THIS WHOLE STORY! IT ROCKED! i really wish you'd do a sequel! Um... LOVED IT!

dragon of spirits

This is really good. :) i hope this isn't the end so plz update soon! XD

WOW!! This chapter was AMAZING!! U must update soon! :D

~Tgurl~

Your story is awesome I just have to say 2 things.
1.You have to have a kissing scene soon.
2. please make them kiss with a dressed Rai.
Club penguin rules

He was wearing his boxers? I think that he should hv done better than that! I thiknk that he should hv summoned d wind 2 do some bitch damage! Update!

HE WALKED OUT... in his boxers?( I wish i could see him then, he must have looked H-O-T) Anyway, awsome chapter! I can't belive this stories gonna end, possibly in the next ch! btw, I wanna know the pillows name!(random fact from me to you, good things happen when I get what I want, bad thinks happen when i don't, like ppl. disapeering off the face of the earth... LOL jk!(