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Reviews For: White Nymph

DreamFlight
2006-10-28
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant! "Dear Perfection..." *wipes tear from eye* Too precious! Please tell me you will update this story one day... *puppy eyes*
Black_Inque
2006-09-26
ch 6, anon.
abuseHeya. It's me. Sorry for not reviewing, but I haven't had a lot of time. If I had the bloody internet in my dorm, it wouldn't be such a problem. >:(
Anyway, onto the review. I like Ryuon and Refina's relationship. They're both headstrong people who can't seem to compromise, and yet they're love for each other is apparent. It's very realistic. Very brother/sister even though they're cousins. Kagero is likeable to as the sort of witty best friend character. He adds that extra touch of humor.
No Dilandau in this chapter, so I hope to see him again in the next. And I wonder what he's going to say about Ryuon and Refina being MIA. Oh, the possibilities...:D
La
2006-09-20
ch 5, anon.
abuseThis is a very good start. I can't wait to see your progress. I'm rather curious on how Rephina receives a guymelf. What in the world is in Fanelia that Dilandau needs? Please don't tell me that Rephina becomes Escaflowne's pilot and Dilandau's enemy.
Black_Inque2002
2006-09-18
ch 5, anon.
abuseWhat's going on? :D I'm loving every word of this. I want more! *jumps up and down with glee*
Dilandau-is-My-Boyfriend
2006-09-13
ch 4,
abuseGreat story so far. I'm really liking this Ryuon character as well. Normally I'm not one for tampering with the original cast etc...but this is a good fic. I'm glad you told me to check it out. Update soon!
-Respire
Dilandau-is-My-Boyfriend
2006-09-13
ch 1,
abuseWell...
At first glance, I thought this was going to be one of those lame "insert own character here"x Dilandau fics...but I was pleasantly surprised to discover that I was wrong!

Very nice chapter. I am, however, curious about how Rephina and her whole story...I'm sure I'll get more as the story goes on.
-Respire
Asrafarel
2006-09-08
ch 1,
abuseusually i tend to not like Rephina. i found rather stupid in the game indeed. (bit a jealousy perhaps XD"") but i quite like your story, you've got a cool writing style.
i don't really agree about some details, but i think most of the DragonSlayer background can be placed under one self-appreciation. nevermind, it's trully interresting.
keep it up.
Black_Inque
2006-09-06
ch 2, anon.
abuseWow! Another great chapter! Refina has fallen hard, hasn't she? Already, she is willing to throw everything away for him. Ahh! So foolish and romantic at the same time! I want more! Rest assured, that although I can't frequent these parts as much as I could at home, I will be watching this story.
AquaMarin
2006-09-01
ch 1,
abuseWhit woo, for new story... and I daresay there is many a fangirl obsessed with Dilandau's "aura." Way to make an AP Euro reference in that story...
Black-Inque2002
2006-08-28
ch 1,
abuse*stares in awe* This was a magnificent piece of work! Digging the way you called Dilandau "Soldier Baby". :) Refina herself is a most intriguing and well-developed woman in her own right. The very end when she loses her composure upon seeing Dilandau for the first time and turning into a giddy teenager was gold! Loved the originiality and inventiveness here. I can't wait to read more!
Heavenly Wolf Blade
2006-08-27
ch 1,
abuseDilandau's my hero. Or maybe Folken. No, probably Dilandau just because Folken was stupid enough to offer him a commanding role.
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