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| DreamFlight 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! "Dear Perfection..." *wipes tear from eye* Too precious! Please tell me you will update this story one day... *puppy eyes* |
| Black_Inque 2006-09-26 ch 6, anon. | abuseHeya. It's me. Sorry for not reviewing, but I haven't had a lot of time. If I had the bloody internet in my dorm, it wouldn't be such a problem. >:( Anyway, onto the review. I like Ryuon and Refina's relationship. They're both headstrong people who can't seem to compromise, and yet they're love for each other is apparent. It's very realistic. Very brother/sister even though they're cousins. Kagero is likeable to as the sort of witty best friend character. He adds that extra touch of humor. No Dilandau in this chapter, so I hope to see him again in the next. And I wonder what he's going to say about Ryuon and Refina being MIA. Oh, the possibilities...:D |
| La 2006-09-20 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis is a very good start. I can't wait to see your progress. I'm rather curious on how Rephina receives a guymelf. What in the world is in Fanelia that Dilandau needs? Please don't tell me that Rephina becomes Escaflowne's pilot and Dilandau's enemy. |
| Black_Inque2002 2006-09-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseWhat's going on? :D I'm loving every word of this. I want more! *jumps up and down with glee* |
| Dilandau-is-My-Boyfriend 2006-09-13 ch 4, | abuseGreat story so far. I'm really liking this Ryuon character as well. Normally I'm not one for tampering with the original cast etc...but this is a good fic. I'm glad you told me to check it out. Update soon! -Respire |
| Dilandau-is-My-Boyfriend 2006-09-13 ch 1, | abuseWell... At first glance, I thought this was going to be one of those lame "insert own character here"x Dilandau fics...but I was pleasantly surprised to discover that I was wrong! Very nice chapter. I am, however, curious about how Rephina and her whole story...I'm sure I'll get more as the story goes on. -Respire |
| Asrafarel 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abuseusually i tend to not like Rephina. i found rather stupid in the game indeed. (bit a jealousy perhaps XD"") but i quite like your story, you've got a cool writing style. i don't really agree about some details, but i think most of the DragonSlayer background can be placed under one self-appreciation. nevermind, it's trully interresting. keep it up. |
| Black_Inque 2006-09-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow! Another great chapter! Refina has fallen hard, hasn't she? Already, she is willing to throw everything away for him. Ahh! So foolish and romantic at the same time! I want more! Rest assured, that although I can't frequent these parts as much as I could at home, I will be watching this story. |
| AquaMarin 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abuseWhit woo, for new story... and I daresay there is many a fangirl obsessed with Dilandau's "aura." Way to make an AP Euro reference in that story... |
| Black-Inque2002 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuse*stares in awe* This was a magnificent piece of work! Digging the way you called Dilandau "Soldier Baby". :) Refina herself is a most intriguing and well-developed woman in her own right. The very end when she loses her composure upon seeing Dilandau for the first time and turning into a giddy teenager was gold! Loved the originiality and inventiveness here. I can't wait to read more! |
| Heavenly Wolf Blade 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuseDilandau's my hero. Or maybe Folken. No, probably Dilandau just because Folken was stupid enough to offer him a commanding role. |