This is very intriquing! (Nessa) I do not recognize any of the characters. What books are you crossing? Are any or all of your characters original? I am hooked, my dear! Will Peter be willing to go and learn to be a knight and perhaps some day slay the evil Archibald and save his former home, or is he an unkind child who will grow into an unkind adult?

Oh, yes, you must continue!