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DelorisPea
2009-08-30 . chapter 1
great fic!!
Silverlynxcat
2009-05-18 . chapter 1
I found it very clever, it showed off Draco's cunning side at the end.
But when it neared the end it did seem quite rushed. The fic could have been made a bit longer with some bit more detail and development with the meeting between harry and Draco or even afterwards.
But even as it is, you pulled it off quite nicely, it was fun to read =3
Haruhi.Hime
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
aha that was cute
deathxofxthexbetrayed
2008-12-10 . chapter 1
Sneaky Draco lol
with-a-flower-in-her-hair
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
The last line... genius. Lol loved it :D
KillerAcorn
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
Good one-shot. You should of made it a longer fic, put some time between the meeting and the sex. It made it all run together, and seem unrealistic. (yes, yes, magic is unrealistic but the plot doesn't have to be). Other than moving a little fast for my liking it was a well written piece.
BloodRedAngel808
2008-07-06 . chapter 1
OMG! XD
Go Draco!

Blessed be,

Angel
Caramello Kennedy
2008-02-25 . chapter 1
awsome fic!
Jim
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
Cute
Angel-o-Darkness
2007-10-13 . chapter 1
haha very cute
lttlelola
2007-01-24 . chapter 1
hmmp! muffling laughter here its bout 2am. oh man great turn of events. draco did it knowing harry would contact him to set it straight.
MindStorm88
2006-10-15 . chapter 1
-snickers- thats great XD the ending, so lovely XD ^^
bloodsucking-llama
2006-09-23 . chapter 1
Interesting story! I enjoyed it a lot.
Aikurushii-Ai
2006-09-05 . chapter 1
that was so good, i love those two together. great job!
00000000000000000000000000000
2006-08-30 . chapter 1
That was hot short and a decent plot i loved it
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