Reviews for The Center Cannot Hold

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Kayla Tsukino 2006-09-08 ch 1,	abuseHello, I think you need to make this a little longer. Add detail, explain yourself. Your readers won't know who Lori ran too, or why. go into more details, make your story longer, if this was ment to be a one-shot, its not very good.
monkmonker2ooo 2006-08-29 ch 1,	abusenice fic