This story is interesting! Keep writing please!

I'm reading [note i said I'm reading i did not sayim reading this story(just kidding)]

Hi, yeah I think you should have put Mokuba in this one. And how is Kaiba going to explain this. Is he going to think its all an illusion, or is he going to relise that some myths have truth in them.

Personally, if Kaiba stopped saying all the wrong things at the wrong times, he would have friends.

Not bad, but slow the pace down a little, it's going too fast.

This is awesome. I love the line, "This is way more fun than the meeting." lol Awesome. More please.

Sincerely,

The Duelist's Heiress

I am reading it and updaite soon

It's not a bad idea, but everything happens a little to fast. Try to slow it down a bit.

I like what you're doing. Keep it up!

Interesting idea. I, too, was a little annoyed at the lack of Kaiba in "Capsule Monsters." Though, I must say, won't Kaiba already having Blue-Eyes screw up the final test a bit? I mean, the "divine one" of the test is Blue-Eyes. Just a thought.

Also, how lucky of Kaiba to get his most powerful monster first thing. Yugi didn't get his Dark Magician right off the bat. I think Kaiba should have gotten Swordstalker or something like that. Better yet, Saggi! He should have gotten Saggi! lol. That would have been funny. Picturing the look on Kaiba's face now...Teehee! He would be SO angry that he got suck a weak monster! Hehehe!

Please update soon!

I'm loving ths story so far, can't wait to see how Kaiba gets into the Fortress!

an interesting story,

but it's not much fun with just Kaiba

*mouth drops* Run Kaiba run! What? No more? Aw... I like it. Please update soon. Please. Pretty please. Pretty please with a cherry on top.

This story rocks! I look forward to the next installment! :)

Good chapter. Kaiba should be called Captain Obvious. He says the most obvious things sometimes.

Bravo! More please! Me like! Good luck!